Story: Don't give up hope
by XJasperSaysRelaxX [K+]Summary:
Bella has only ever wanted a child with Edward, but so far, it seems impossible. Rosalie finds out shes pregnant but things start to go wrong from day one. Edward proposes to Bella, and at their wedding, there's one present Edward will never forget... AHCharacters/Pairings:
Bella/Edward, Rosalise/Emmett, Jasper/Alice, Esme/Carlisle. Charlie, Jake, Paul, Jessica, Mike, Victoria, Renee, Phil. AH. Slightly OOC at points.Categories:
Romance, Drama, Family, Friendship.Reason for recommendation:
I usually read M rated stories becuase I love reading stories that have lemons in and that arent 'all happy' becuase of the young rating. But when a friend told me about this story, i had to go see what the fuss was all about. I read the summary and thought to myself 'Good summary, lets see if the story is just as good' Over my years of reading FanFics, i've tried reading stories other than M rated ones, and havent got any further than the first chapter. But when i started to read this story, the only reason i wanted to leave chapter 1, was because i couldnt wait to read chapter 2!
Even though the writer has only writen a short 1st chapter, she makes up for it throughout the story. The writer was still in the prime of her writing at the start, so i fully understand her position, after all we all start somewhere. Moving on. So, even though the chapter is short, the more you read into the story, the more you see her skills develop. By about the 4th chapter, i was hooked and couldnt do anything but read on.
She adds humour from all charecters throughout the story, and adds all the requried emotions and actions that we'd use in the same situations. Even though Bella seems rather OTT and OOC at times, its totaly worth it in the end. Because who doesnt love a bit of bitchyness? (You'll understand when you read the story)
The writer shows Bella's struggle to get pregnant amazingly. Even though she's only young, she knows quite a lot for her age. The way the other charecters are shown is incredible, how realistic they are towards Bella throughout the story.
In the story, the writer shows the reader that not everything is a fairy tale. After Rose's misscarriage, the truth of realism shows more than ever. Yet there's no lemons in the story, the drama makes up for it. Plus, the writer is thinking of starting a seperate story which include the 'missing' lemons from the story.
It's deffinitley worth the read and i suggest that you go read it ASAP!
And review because the story hasnt been given the attention it deserves.
Plus, the sequel is up for the story and i must say, its amazing!http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5384901/1/Dont_give_up_hope